
Three hours slipped by…
You aged only fifteen minutes.
The smile that became you
Sat etched on your face.
There’s memory now
Where once was before me
That time is my essence
My present can’t erase.
Speaking of art
And of grand designs
Speaking non-linerally
Both of one kind;
Two stories sharing
More than a meal
That fifteen minutes of aging
Was the most real.
The thunder did startle
And the rain came pouring down
The softness that followed
Enveloped the crowd
So we went on with passions
Of the intellect and the heartFifteen minutes, it felt like But the hours did fly Engrossed and enthralling Seeing eye to eye… You said I looked young I said you did as well We smiled at the knowledge That our beings did not betray The truth of the passing Of our many birthdays. Fifteen minutes, you swore It felt that way for me too Fifteen minutes of aging I spent them with you. Three hours slipped by… You aged only fifteen minutes. The smile that became you Sits etched in my heart.
This poem spoke to me, reached into my heart. Ah, those fifteen minutes.
I wish life was all made up of those 15 mins…it would be bliss.
What a lovely way to share a memory. Someone before me said it, “the way you weave words” is beautiful, and thought provoking. Just thinking about memories, and special people, has brought some very fond ones to mind. As always, thanks for sharing your gift and your heart in your writing.
Ahhhhh, nostalgia….
Thanks Jill. Yeah, it was nice. Needed to feel this.
Well spoken. No matter what the physical changes or how much time has passed, when you love someone and look at them the mind provides its favorite image of them, like a subtle overlay. (That isn’t well put, but I’m sure you know what I mean. It’s early
) )
Li…I understand completely. It is early…and I just want to go back to bed. Thanks, as always.
I have a 15 minuted smile etched on my face now – I had to read it 3 times and I think I may go back for another. Excellent – Love it!
Thank you SJ. I love that: “I have a 15 minute smile etched on my face now”. Nice.
Oh beautiful…loved the way you weave words!
Thank you Sonia. I love language & words.
Absolutely fantastic poem, it’s beautiful, romantic and sweet, loved it.
Thank you sulekha!