Dance, she said, as if nothing else mattered
Undulating to an inner rythem
The soles of her feet bleeding and tattered
Never once off beat, no movement schism.
Twirling and drops, all new levels she found
Jeté off the floor, with a mighty leap
Cascading in the air; swirling around
Then crumble to the ground, sprawling heap.
But, if the knees gave way and the bones creak
If the supple muscles give to decay
If the energy wanes leaving her weak
What happens to her if dance goes away?
She must dance to the end, freely flowing
The movements leave her breathless and glowing
I simply adore this poem. I was wondering, Stuart, if there was a deeper meaning within this sonnet. Thanks for your beautiful writing.
Most of what I write, poetry wise, takes on deeper meanings through the referencing of the reader. I had a few things in mind when I wrote this. Thank you for the compliment. It is really appreciated.
I am a dancer and this explains my life. Beautiful!
I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you.
A lovely poem…Some people have a gift, they dance as if it was as natural as breathing…
Dance is natural, and singing/music, and art, and storytelling…
Thanks Muriel
Beautiful Stu. Ah I always wanted to be a dancer…unfortunately the knees went…at least I have writing and photography.
you can still enjoy dance. I do. Thanks Janine.
You put the essence of dance onto paper. As an artist challenges or asks the
viewer to put his own meaning to his work,you have done just that for the dancer, or choreographer. Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it several times over.
thank you Jill. I’ll give you a call tomorrow. Just got home. Glad you liked it.
The vibrance and life in this is so wonderful Stu! Energy and motion in words. Excellent sonnet.
Thank you Cathy. I do love dance, and music..hell, I love the arts. Glad you liked it.
I really enjoyed reading this!
Thank you GE. Glad you liked it.
Looking forward to your picks for the Worst Movies Ever blogfest on Monday!
Confession time : I always associate the word sonnet with medieval poetry … so it’s something of a “creative shock” to my system when I read modern sonnets … almost anachronism … like the sonnet belongs to another era … I know it’s silly … and I will get used to it .
With that out of the way , this is poetry in motion – there’s an energy in your sonnet , almost as if this could be a dance-till-you-drop scenario ?
Mish, the sonnet is A form of poetry, like Haiku, that can, IMO, transcend any time period. I’m not crazy about haikus, and it shows in the few I’ve tried. This has been an experiment for me to see what I can make of the structure.
Glad you like it. Thank you.
Hah… you should read my roadkill sonnet, some time. This one is at least about the ethereal and spiritual movement of dance. I write sonnets with tire tracks on them.
It’s the tire tracks of the heart!! fun…post the link!!!
Thanks for the invitation! http://www.scribd.com/doc/7833519/Mood-Swings – Enjoy! (The sonnet mentioned is “Two Armadillos’ Strife”)
Dance as if your life depended on it…:-) beautiful.
Thank you Janaki.