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Tails of the Fox: Nine Haiku’s
Our Story Thus Far…
It ancient Japan, Chiyoko had bribed Kitsune, the trickster Fox, with his favorite food, a freshly caught kunimasu salmon that was ready to spawn. From that day forward, Chiyoko would be known, and feared by many, as The Kitsune-Mochi, the Fox Witch. On a path of vengeance against the wicked, The Kitsune-Mochi used the powers of Fox to call on lesser demons (oni) to right wrongs. That is, until she crossed paths with Red Helen, a beautiful oni made up of a hundred-hundred deadly butterflies. Their parting was not amicable.
Fox, while liking being fed, does not like being held under anyone’s sway for too long. He plots to change this…
(1)
Dreams of giving chase
Nestled in Fox den; at dark
Fortunes change in light
(2)
Embrangled tightly
Fox waits for chance to break free;
Desire, Bidding time
(3)
Kitsune-Mochi sits
Trickster Fox food devours
Her will, for now, done
(4)
Vengeance Spirits come
Engulf the wicked, ensnare
Fox yawns; time is near
(5)
The Fox Witch grows tired
Her grief so long to abate
Lamentable, she
(6)
Red Helen, intrigued
Plotting with traitorous Fox
Smiles deadly poison
(7)
Asleep, alone; NOW
Driven winds of hundred wings
Deadly red blanket
(8)
Curse uttered slowly
Kitsune-Mochi spins away
Defeats betrayal
(9)
Fox Witch hunts the Fox
He slinks in shadows and dusk
Wrath is on his tail
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To learn more about The Nine-Tailed Fox in mythology
I have collected all of my stories & narrative poems on The Fox Witch in one spot:
If you’d like to read the series (as is, to this point), please go to The Prologue: The Kitsune-Mochi Saga
Author’s Note on This Posting:
I was asked to submit a Haiku for a competition by someone who has read my work (mentioning Coconut Music specifically). I haven’t written one in about five years, even though I do it with students. The compliment got me thinking, and drove me to try a new tactic for this series, which I do love. I hope it works on some narrative level, even if you’re not familiar with the myth or the previous work I’ve written on this. I’d appreciate any comments you might have. Thanks.
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These are quite good–very clever. I’m going to read them over a few more times–I enjoyed them very much!
Thanks Judith. I had fun doing them.
These are wonderful! I am going to pass them along to friends…
Thank you for sharing your talent (even though you say you are “not a master”).
Thank you Emmy. I appreciate the sharing. Talent…yeah, I feel/know I have some talent. Master? It’d be nice to get to that level.
I really love your Kitsune-Mochi series, and this fits in quite nicely. Haiku is a very difficult, precise form, it seems that you can master just about any type of writing.
)) Next maybe limerick?
hmmm…is that a challenge? We used to improvise limericks…need five people. OK.. I’ll try it sometime. Thanks Li. Glad you love this series….so do I
I like the way each builds on the haiku before. Extremely clever. Great work, Stuart.
Thank you so much, Mary.
loved the form of this Stu…you took creativity to another level…
Thanks Cathy. Like the sonnet, I was just trying something different.
Oh modest master,
Skilled in Haiku narrative -
Clever brevity.
Great work Sir!
Great Haiku, Rachel. Thanks.
I don’t think I’ve ever read a story in haiku form before!
Hope you liked it, GE.
Ok adding to Joys adjective…. flair for beautiful words, beauty, ingenuity. And really, have these published! Please !
Thank you Hajra! One day, I’ll finish this. promise.
Pure talent!! What else is there to say?
Joy…hmmm…I could come up with more adjectives!
Thank you.
I am amazed that you can write using so many different styles!
Sometimes, so am i, Muriel. This is what stretching is about. Thanks.
I never imagined you could write a whole story with haiku.
Hm… something to think about
Anna, as I mentioned, I was just trying something out. Haiku, in it’s actual form, I’m not a master of by any means. Thanks. Good luck with trying it.