The blast sent bricks, metal, furniture, and Mrs. Beatty, raining down on the parked cars and beyond. The damage to the vehicles on the street and parking lot was substantial, and a five car accident resulted from Mrs. Beatty landing on the windshield of a SUV speeding by.
The building, itself, was ablaze with smoke alarms blaring and a roaring fire that was ripping up the left wing apartments. Most of the residents were luckily at work, saving their lives if not their possessions. The not so lucky were many of the cats, dogs, fish, and other assorted pets that were locked up on that side of the building. The yappy little house dwelling dogs yapped their last.
Fire trucks arrived, their sirens wails mixed in with police cars, ambulances and car alarms honking. The (ex)inhabitants of Swan Rise Apartments, who had been home when the blast occurred, were being treated for smoke inhalation, shock or left to their own devices, milling about Swan Road aimlessly. Many clutched their pets to their chests, matted fur from tears and dribbled noses.
The Super was being questioned by the fire chief; his wife was standing with two of her five girls, arms crossed across her chest and glaring at him. Ida, Evelyn, Helen, Dotty and Bella-the Laundry Room Mafia-were in various states of dishevelment. The Weather Man was lost, muttering to himself, pacing down the long block only to return, looking at the fire, wearing a confused mien. Frank just stood, jostled occasionally as others moved about, not noticing him, as normal.
It took hours to put the fire out. Spreading from the second floor of the late Mrs. B all the up to the fifth floor, the flames also took out inner apartments and was reaching towards the right wing. The heat was intense, melting the elevator works and welding shut the third and fourth floor doors. Smoke was the new inhabitant, seeping under every door of the six floored architectural mess. If it wasn’t just scorched, the remains carried the smell.
By dusk, all but five of Swan Rise were accounted for. Mrs. Beatty and three others were dead, and fourteen were in the hospital, none too serious (although Mr. Bob Fields did have a heart attack and was being closely monitored). Swan Road, just off the Swan River Parkway, near the ever flowing trickle of Swan River, was a mess of apartment dwellers, accident rubber neckers, and the remains of the first responders.
The fire was out, smoldering remains were being taken care of, and the fire chief made a determination: the property had been cited before for old gas lines and disruptions, as complained about by the Swan Rise Apartments Committee. Mrs. Beatty’s stove was the epicenter of the deflagration. A full inquiry would be made and the Super and the building management were put on notice. Lawyers were already drawing up arguments.
Damaged and unsafe, no one was allowed back in. Weeping and very heavy hearts continued as night settled in. The temperature dropped, forcing all to finally make their way to makeshift lodgings for the night.
Swan Rise Apartments died this day.
…ashes, ashes…it all falls down…
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Author’s Note:
Welcome to the A to Z Challenge.
During the month of April, over 1,200 bloggers are joining in on this blogfest. Writing 26 posts using the letters of the alphabet to prompt the posts, you’ll find a mixture of fiction and non-fiction. While impossible to read all 1,200+, the idea is to open yourself to new readers, hopefully attain new followers, and to discover others to follow yourself.
For me, it’s to just get my writing chops back in gear. I’ve allowed a lot of distractions to do just that: distract me.
Last year, starting with the letter C, I wrote an ongoing story that was a combo of Speculative Fiction/Humor/Thriller. I still plan to revisit Winston, Elora and Daniel (and cast) one day.
This year, I have an overall theme of creative fiction: The Apartment Building.
The letter A sees the destruction of said building. From B to Z, I’ll be exploring stories of the characters that lived in the building, and aspects of the building itself. As of this writing, I have the titles planned out as my only outline.
I’ve previously written about The Apartment Building, which is what gave me the idea to flesh the whole thing out on this blogfest: The Whistler Is Dead (February 2, 2012) and in a slightly different vein, Velocity (February 25, 2012).
I’m excited about the upcoming stories and I hope you enjoy them. I also hope you discover other blogs through this. You can click on the link above, the logo in this post or on my sidebar to take you to the main page of the AtoZ Challenge.
Well I must say that this is one heck of a start to the story. This should attract a crowd on gawking onlookers to see where this story goes. Great way to start your Challenge.
Lee
An A to Z Co-Host
Tossing It Out
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
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Thank you Lee. Hmmm…I hope the gawkers enjoy what’s to come. I’ll be reading more blogs this week. Trying to plan how to visit 1500+ blogs. Aieeeee…. 😉
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All I could think was poor Mrs. Beatty. That was an explosive way to go and a fiery way to start your A to Z blogging. Very cool…or rather, hot.
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Yes, poor Mrs. Beatty. Her story is coming up later in the month. Thanks Angela.
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Nice Post 😀 I came across your blog via the A-Z Challenge. You can check mine out at http://yadinbromberg.blogspot.com
Thanks and good luck with A-Z 🙂
Cheers!
-Yadin
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Thanks Yadin. I’ll be making my rounds to as many as possible.
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Pretty strong stuff for April 1st! Yes this is a very good start for a series I look forward to 🙂 Keep going!
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Well, April Fools Day needs some strong grounding, n’est pas? Thanks…I will keep going. I’m jazzed for this month.
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Hi Stuart, hey I remember you from the Renaissance blogging thing! This is such a great narrative – full of details and the pace is riveting. Can’t wait to read more!
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Welcome Melanie. Glad you’re one of the REN3 stalwarts. A very different approach to these stories. Thanks for the comments.
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Great start…..can’t wait to read the rest.
Good luck
Xx
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Thank you Vikki. I hope you enjoy where I’m going with the coming posts.
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I lol-ed at this one, “The yappy little house dwelling dogs yapped their last.”
Great start.
anna
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Ah, those yappy things need super glue to hush them up. Glad you found the humor that was intended.
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Excellent beginning, I like how you’ve given us a taste of some of the characters that will be appearing 🙂
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Thanks Li. There are more to explore, and I’ll discover them as I go along. Looking forward to your stories,
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Wonderful start to the challenge, look forward to reading more.
Yvonne.
Repeated comment as not sure whether the first reached you.
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Thank you Yvonne. I’ll be checking out others blogs as much as possible. I deleted the other post. No worries. 😉
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What a fascinating theme for the A-Z Challenge, and what a dramatic way to start the story. Look forward to finding out more about all the characters.
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Thanks Paula. I’ve been chomping at the bit once I realized what I was going to do.
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Awesome start,Stu! Poor Mrs. Beatty … I love your way with the choosing the striking details. You really do know how to spin a tale. I look forward to seeing how this unfolds!
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Thanks Adriene. I think you’ll enjoy what’s to come. I have some devilment and merriment acomin’.
btw…you all should check out Adriene’s poetry at: Sweepy Jean Explores The Webby World at http://sweepyjean.wordpress.com/
She is not participating in AtoZ, but IS part of the NaPoWriMo blogfest. Check her out
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Exciting start to the story. You piqued my curiosity to hear a back story on some of these people. I wonder why the super’s wife is glaring, why are those women called the laundry room mafia… Very much enjoyed this!
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I’ll be exploring those things, and more, as we go along. Glad you enjoyed this, Bonnie.
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Excellent concept for fleshing out a story. You piqued my interest from the very first sentence. I’m hoping that Mrs. Beatty will be a major focus on Day B. 🙂
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Thanks Jack. The microcosm of the building gives me a great place to play. We’ll see more of Mrs. Beatty on M, later in the month.
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Great structural concept for a story. You had my interest piqued from the very first paragraph. I hope Day B focuses on Mrs. Beatty. 🙂
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A brilliant start and an even better description of the scene and the people in the story. It will be a treat to read the completed story bit by bit 🙂
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Thank you, Sulekha. I’ve been trying to plot out the letters I still had open. Almost done.
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A stonking start! Poor Mrs Beatty. I have a lot of questions as well (Laundry Room Mafia). What is it with you and swans?
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Hmmm…not sure if I have anything with Swans. They play a part in one of the latter stories. As to your questions, more will be revealed, day by day. Thanks Muriel.
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That’s an interesting premise for the A to Z challenge. I’ll have to follow along and see what the characters are like who go with the Apartment Building.
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Thanks Erin. I hope you and everyone enjoy what’s coming up
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Should be interesting to see the characters of the Apartment Building.
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You’re off to a blazing start with the A-Z Challenge! 🙂
Great flash fiction.
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Thanks GE. Will get around to your entries Monday.
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interesting post for A
here is mine
GAC a-z do check it out at my page
http:// pa-ul .blogspot .com
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Stu, ooooh love that first line—‘and Mrs. Beatty’—lol. Will be stopping by often for the updates!
—Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Amlokiblogs
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
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Glad you found the Black/Dark humor I was going for here, even with the finality/sadness happening. I’ll be stopping by later today to read posts. Thanks Damyanti.
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Great start! I’m doing a similar idea (although my story will unfold as each letter develops the characters in flash fiction style!) so I’m definitely keen on keeping track of the creativity displayed in others’ posts. Apartments have so many different personalities that this is sure to be an awesome project for you to explore!
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Thanks June. I am leaving this open to what strikes me with each title. I have a very rough idea for each letter. We’ll see what I wind up with. I’ll seek yours out.
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My April schedule is not flexible enough to make room for the A-Z challenge, but I just might join the ranks next year.
For now, I’ll just hang around and keep reading…
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I hope you continue to enjoy. Yes, things are tight, but it’s fun (so far). Thanks Eleni
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Due to being offline for a while, I have read your A-Z entries backwards so far. I found this first piece very interesting , and am looking forward to the rest of the month, and reading them in order. The weather man seems a bit of an add duck, so I hope to hear more about him.
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Hi Jill…you’ll find out about him here and there, but def on the W day, Already reserved for him.
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Wow, this is powerful. I especially love the first line, the surprise of having Mrs. Beatty in the list of things raining down. Sorry I have been a slacker in terms of reading/commenting this month, but I plan to catch up.
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No problem Lisa. I hope you’ll enjoy what I’ve written already and what’s to come. Thanks
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I didn’t get to your blog during April & have just of of it from Vikki of The View outside via her reflective post. What a great start off. Shame I have to go out, but later I plan to read B-Z and I am sure I will enjoy them. Will be looking forward to yor development of the series. Congratulations!
My A-Z is over at http://anglersrest.blogspot.com
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Welcome Julie. No time like the present. I’ll have to check out your blog as well. Thanks for coming over, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series.
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