I set fire to the house, watching it burn a safe distance away. Flames lept up into the night, licking up the side paneling that I no longer had to worry about painting. The gutters melted, the tarred shingles smoked; it all came tumbling down, bit by bit, ashes to ashes. The chimney was the last thing to fall, having never been set right in the first place.
Neighbors surrounded me, many of them holding onto their spouse or children. They looked at me, wondering where Margaret was. She screamed then. They knew.
Later, police handcuffed me. Asked me “Why?”
I blamed it on the dog.
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100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week #48
This is a weekly challenge for those who are over 16 and enjoy challenging themselves with writing. Each week you are given a prompt. It may be a few connected words, a selection of individual words or a picture.
You have 100 words (or the number that have been set for that week) plus the prompt to write a creative piece. If you have a blog, post it on your blog then link the URL of the post (not the blog) to the link that is at the bottom of that week’s challenge. You can right click the badge above and copy the image URL into your post.
This weeks challenge:
… I blamed it on the dog…
Your pieces should be 106 words long (the prompt plus 100). Please make sure you visit to comment on others and do leave a link back here for others to find us.
This was a fun exercise. Well done with the creativity!
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Thanks Leah. I like having to tell a lot in so little.
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I wonder what ticked this character off. Intriguing, though sad, piece!
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GE, I KINDA left a very little hint as to the why. It’s there, subtle, and not a sane person’s reason by any stretch.
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He set fire to his house just to stop his wife nagging him about painting it? What a great reaction! Love stories about mad people.
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You know there was more to it, but that was a solution. Darn dogs. 😉
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Oh . . . I think I get it now. I’d originally just interpreted the observations as a side effect. 🙂
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Here’s my interpretation: Margaret wanted the side panel painted, he didn’t want to do it. He was told to fix the chimney and did a slip shod job and was probably criticized. His wife wanted a dog, he didn’t, and threatened this, but she got one anyway. Last straw. She’s just come back from walking the $%^£ dog and screamed when she saw what he’d done and he feels flushed with victory. For once, he’s got his own way. What a brilliant mystery, intelligently crafted. You thought about this!
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ummm…yeah..ok..I did…lol. 😉
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Nice drabble – clever ending. Of course, maybe the dog DID do it… 🙂
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Never know what goes on in the minds of canines
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well, this is one way to remodel a house…or start over when it isn’t going well…wonder why I never thought of this. I have plenty of dogs to blame it on. 😀
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Insurance rates will go up for people with dogs now. 😉
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Intriguing and creepy! Love it!
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Thanks Lisa. Yours was such a different take…got me going on this one.
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Glad to be a spark.
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Oh nice one. I wonder if she got away with it? (Can you charge a dog with arson!?)
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🙂 Habeus Canine!!!
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Very effectively shocking! Poor Margaret.
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Poor Margaret indeed…why, if you had only heard what she said last week…never mind. Don’t speak ill of the dead. 😉
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I wonder what the motivation was for such extreme action? Well written, yet such tragedy
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Some mad people, there doesn’t have to be a big reason. In this case, less is more. Thanks.
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You certainly packed a lot of story in here, well done!
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Thank you Gilly. I enjoy these challenges.
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Ahhh, that rascally pooch! The same one that ate your homework assignments in grade school? No, probably not. Well done, Stu, a gold star and two brownies to you!
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mmmmm….brownies. 🙂 Thanks Allan
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Shocking…. but yes, beautifully written!
Who knew, the dog?
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oooohh, I promise I’ll never nag my hubby again !
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Pets are so awesome. I bet the dog was happy to have helped.
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Fun exercise. I love the last sentence too!
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