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TIGER TIGER
The varied greens of the forest. The blue of the sky, lakes, and ponds. Yellow sunlight. Browns of bark. Fields of multi-colored flowers waved in the wake of air swept through. Only the passing of the predators truly disturbed the scene.
She surveyed the others, moving languidly from one thicket to another. Her watchful gaze kept tabs. The kill would be hers, and hers alone.
There.
Finally.
Her eyes locked on to what she wanted. Intensified. A break in the uniformity. She was there, taking in every aspect, color perfect. The shape, the texture…
She pounced and made it hers.
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Author’s Note:
The title (basically) comes from a William Blake poem:
"Tyger Tyger, Burning Bright In the Forests of the Night. What Immortal Hand or Eye, Could Frame they Fearful Symmetry?"
Combine that with the above picture (look at the store names), and voila!
PS: And yes, I do know that “Tiger! Tiger!” was the UK title of Alfred Bester’s “The Stars My Destination.” Except for one scene, it’s a favorite book. Or favourite. Your choice.
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Author’s Note:
It’s #Friday Fictioneers prompt time, as always created and hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields on her blog, Addicted To Purple.
The rules are simple if you’d like to do this:
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- Use the photo on Addicted to Purple as your prompt (goes up on Wednesday).
- Write a 100 word story, complete with beginning, middle, and end.
- Make every word count.
- It is proper etiquette to give the contributor of the photo credit.
- Add the InLinkz button (below) so your readers can find the dozens of other bloggers who have taken up this challenge.
Good spot. A vivid hunting scene.
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Thanks, Iain.
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Very descriptive. I like her. She knows what she wants and attacks.
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Ruthless when she needs to be. Thanks, Alice.
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I really like how you explained the connections. It really helps me as a reader and so thanks for taking the time –
and nice way to use the image – very creative
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Thanks. I did that mainly because what comes to MY mind is often not everyone’s POV. Normally I wouldn’t do it, but…
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😊
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Great scene and descriptions. The calm and quiet before sudden violence.
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Yes, or finding the perfect blouse. Thanks.
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Terrific description of a big cat’s hunt and kill. I could see that cinematically, but also with the eyes of the huntress. Lovely writing.
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Thank you, Penny. I’m really glad that you could envision this. One of my goals with the piece.
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Yum!
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Good to the last drop! Thanks, Roy
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Excellent title for this tense little story. Good tension.
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As I mentioned above, the title and the storyline came from the pic. Thanks for the comments.
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A vivid picture of the tiger in her habitat, the tiger who walks alone perhaps ?
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The prey is not to be shared. Thanks, Francine
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Really enjoyed this, Stu. The imagery you described truly brought it to life.
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Thank you, Dale. Glad you liked it.
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Clever piece. Waiting waiting and then gone! Who will be next I wonder
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Maybe a What before a Who. 🙂 Thanks, Laurie.
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Dear Stu,
This was a different take on the prompt. You leaped out of the box with it. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle.
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The predator got its prey. Nicely done.
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Thank you
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This reminds me of watching a woman shop. Once they find their prey it’s all over.
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Russell, you’re the first to get what I was writing about.
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Wonderful descriptions bring the scene to life. And when the sales start in a shopping center, it’s always a jungle out there 😉
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Bingo! Yes it is. Thanks.
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Hunts come in all shapes and sizes. Nicely written.
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Thanks, JoHawk
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i wonder why it’s always a she. perhaps while men are smart, women are smarter? 🙂
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Well, that’s a given. I go back and forth with gender. I’ve tried to write a gender fluid character or two, but I need more understanding in this area. Thanks for the comment.
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On either level, shopping or meat-hunting, your story works brilliantly. Very cleverly done.
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Wow. Thanks, Jilly. The mall and the name on the store sent me this way.
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Well written tale of the intensity of a hunt
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Thank you, Michael. Glad you went on the hunt with her.
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I wonder who became meal this time…
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It depends what crosses her path. Thanks, Bjorn
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Vividly done. A great metaphor for going after what you want.
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Thank you, Lisa. Always appreciated your comments.
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Wow. Thank you, Iain. Your work is amazing, day in and day out.
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