A CAR IN THE WOODS
An abandoned car is found in the woods. No road leading in, the dense gathering of trees surrounding it close together. Sunlight barely broke through the thick cover of leaves. The grass was stunted, starving for the light. Prickly brambles grew everywhere.
Nothing the size of that car should have been in there.
Discovered by hunters, Todd Wilson and Barry Carter, who were where they should not have been. Following an 8 point Buck led them on a long, winding chase. The Buck kept his life that day, racing off onto Government land. Todd and Barry knew enough to let it go.
Needing to catch their breaths, both pissed their quarry bounded off, beer was a given answer. Neither spoke as they chugged; they stared off in the direction of their lost prize. Todd was on his second beer while Barry was hitting his third. They nodded to each other, tossed the drained cans over their shoulders, and started their way back.
But something shiny caught them both in the eyes. The daylight had moved along just enough. Nothing should have reflected with the intensity that hit them square on. But, something did. Barry nodded and took off in the direction of the glare. Todd followed.
Following the intense gleam, they passed, and ignored, a rusted “Keep Out/ Government Property” sign that hung crookedly on one of the trees. Moving through was becoming tougher, the trees squeezing together. Todd murmured that is like a tree fort. Barry told him to shut it.
The prickly brambles in between the trunks caught at their clothing, drawing enough droplets of blood and curses from the hunters. They reached the clearing in the middle of all the towering wood. Both stopped, stared, and while Barry’s jaw dropped, Todd whistled. They both loved cars.
They loved this car especially. It came up in every conversation they had about cars. Their visits to the dealer wore out their welcome. Eleven times, with no hint of purchasing any car.
But, here. Their dream car was right before them. Not a soul around; not one they could see, anyway.
A Cherry Red Thunderbird two-door convertible! It was the model they drooled over: it had a 430ci Lincoln Interceptor J-code engine, power steering, power brakes, power windows, power seat and a new power top. It had Kelsey Hayes wire rims, front to back chrome accents, and it was smear and dirt free. What made it a little off was the convertible top: stuck, half up, half down. Barry began a low round of giggles. Todd gave him the look, but laughed himself when Barry told him that it looked like it didn’t know if it was coming or going.
Nothing was found to identify the owner. No VIN numbers, license plate, papers in the car. No stickers on the inside of the car doors, and nothing under the hood. Todd knew that the last of these beauties were produced in August of that year. It was too pristine to be any older. He thought it be something if this was the very last one made.
The inside was spotless, until Todd and Barry ran their dusty, greasy hands all over while they searched. They marred the doors, dashboard, red vinyl seats with white inserts, and even the shiny body. No matter what, the trunk wouldn’t open. Another thing that spoiled the perfection of this vehicle. .
The realization that the forest had been dead quiet didn’t hit them until a series of clicking sounds came from behind them. First one side, then another. The clicking grew in volume and then stopped. They saw nothing. No movement of any kind. There was hardly any wind to blow the leaves high above, no animals loping through, and no bugs buzzing. Quiet surrounded the duo as their nerves started to wither. The sun started its descent. That was enough. Barry and Todd made a hasty retreat.
They made it back to their truck, and sped home. Todd’s wife, Daphne, listened as they went into the whole story, the Buck a ten pointer, the extra miles they chased it, and the Ford, the Thunderbird that had assaulted Daphne’s ears way too many times. Her arms were crossed and her right foot was tapping away. She thought they just drank the day away. The boys insisted. Insisted very loudly and with enough conviction that Daphne had enough. Best way to get some peace and quiet would be to put this in the hands of the Sheriff.
She settled back with a cold one in her hand. She closed her eyes as she heard the Sheriff’s Fairlane start and drive off.
Sheriff John Miner was close to retirement. Close enough that he really didn’t care if there was a car or not. If he hadn’t gone against his instincts he might have lived long enough to hand in his badge and retire someplace warm. In the long run, he didn’t make it.
The search for the car was a bust. The Sheriff fumed as he dropped the two dopes outside the local bar.
Todd and Barry, meanwhile, made their story profitable, earning free drinks at the Barn House Bar from folks who wanted to know all the details. As the telling went on, the story…grew. It wormed its way to nearby towns by weeks end, speculations growing along the way. Wherever Todd and Barry went drinking, they set more wheels spinning.
The searching was intense. Many said they found the trees and the clearing, but no TBird. Reports were passed around: the car was glimpsed in Jeffery Hallow. No; it shone brightly at the opening of the large bear cave on Decry Hill. One group said it was by a stream, others in different parts of the forest. Never any proof; it started to slide out of their minds with each disappointment. People stopped looking for the car.
Until a group of four High School students went looking, and they did not come home.
There was a car in the woods.
Charred. Rusted. Busted.
Picked clean. Shell just a remainder.
No road. No reason. Just there.
Not always in the same place, but there.
No one knew anything, the how or the why.
Tales grew around it.
Some said haunted. Some said the Devil parked it there. Maybe a UFO, with all the disappearances. Or not. No one was really sure. Most didn’t want to know.
There was a car in the woods.
Welcome to the 2019 AtoZ Blog Challenge. This is my sixth year participating, going back to 2011, the year I started Tale Spinning.
My theme this year is A Car In The Woods. First installment is above. Not every post will be this long. Length will vary. I just needed the “prologue” to set the tone.
Each time I’ve participated has been very different, from Mystery to Horror, from an Apartment Building’s residents to Road Sign drabbles. I just let the creative juices flow.
A Car In The Woods, as stands right now, will be a serialized tale with some interludes. Kind of like last year’s The Abysmal Dollhouse, but, hopefully, a bit tighter. That’s my goal. We’ll see where it goes.
Comments/Feedback is always appreciated. Check out other blogs who are taking this April’s challenge by clicking on The Master List. You’ll find a variety of blogs that you might enjoy.
Nice hook. I’m attentive now and wondering where this will go.
Tossing It Out
Thanks, Arlee. I’m wondering the same thing. 🙂
Very intriguing. Great start. What next?
We’ll see with B. Thank you.
Great start, and those final few words have left me intrigued and wanting more!
My children’s stories – Are we there yet?
And more you will get…25 more chapters, at least. Thanks, Keith.
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A good start. This hooked me into the story and makes me wonder where you will take it.
Wondering, wondering, wondering. So much wondering. 🙂 Thanks, Alana
Then and now. A mystery not explained.
Well, it wouldn’t be much of a mystery if I gave it all away in the first post. 🙂
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Excellent start, Stu. Almost David Baldacci meets Stephen King. Expertly narrated.
Thank you, Varad. High compliments indeed. Now I have to read a David Baldacci book (yes, I know; I read so many others, just haven’t picked up one by him. Yet).
This sounds very intriguing. I love the way you’re starting this.
Thanks, Jacqui. I’ll be working hard to sustain this.
The stage is set, and the plot thickens. Looking forward to the next episode.
Thanks, Alice. I hope to have the day’s chapter up by 12:10 am everyday, mainly for anyone overseas reading this.
Breathlessly eerie and subtle. I kept thinking “What’s going to happen? What’s going to happen?”, expecting some kind of jump-scare. Can’t wait to read more!
Thank you. Well, B should give you a little…tingle.
you’ve got my interest. bridginasauthorpageat.wordpress.com
The title alone grabbed my interest. I am curious enough to read in…
I hope you enjoy what is unfolding. Thanks, Gail
Looking forward to reading the rest of the tale as it unfolds! (Do you even know how it unfolds?)
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Just asking, because I rarely do when I start a story. I am definitely a “pantser.”
Yes, so am I. I have the basic thought for the month, but each day is a surprise. I had no intention of the posting on Thursday (D) would get split into three parts. The idea when beyond readability for a blog piece. As it is, I’m not getting that many hits because of the lengths of the stories (I think that’s the reason).
Oh my Stu, despite my natural avoidance of horror, you’ve hooked me in. Great start, really. One benefit of starting my A-Z reading journey late is that I’ve got a week worth of tales to catch up on.
Glad you are on board, and that you’ve enjoyed it. Thanks, Debs
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Great start. Hopping onto B.
Welcome, Namratha. Glad you are taking the ride with us.
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