PHOTO PROMPT submitted by Courtney Wright. © Photographer prefers to remain anonymous.
Clark was sitting just outside of Fishawi. He was on his second cup of strong Arabic coffee. Tonight there was tension in the souk. It bled into him.
Shouting stopped him mid-sip. Suddenly, Clark experienced the bombers.
Clark was thrown forward. Ears ringing, he still heard the screaming.
Dazed, Clark slightly lifted himself up. Blood was flowing, stinging his eyes. He wiped at it.
Blood cleared eyes saw a sad looking pair of old boots right by his head.
“Oh, Sh…” he began, before the blast took him, and the martyr.
Her boots were found upright among the remains.
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Author’s Notes:
I guess I’m doing prompt challenges for the time being. The above was a prompt from Addicted to Purple by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields that she calls Friday Fictioneers . The rules for this prompt are simple:
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- Use the photo on Addicted to Purple as your prompt.
- Write a 100 word story, complete with beginning, middle, and end.
- Make every word count.
- It is proper etiquette to give the contributor of the photo credit.
I had noticed some stories on blogs that I follow were using the same photo. Just reading a bit let me onto this project. I really need to do more blog hopping. I’m so bad at that.
Let’s see where a new prompt will lead me.
I guess he didn’t get to go with his boots on.
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Well, I only had 100 words to play with. His footwear never really entered the picture. 🙂
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Dear Stu,
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. FYI, I added you to the link list. Not difficult at all.
Grisly story. You had me there in the souk.
I’ll warn you, writing these 100 word stories and interacting with this international community is quite habit forming. I joined 6 years ago as one of the gang and you see where it’s gotten me 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I like a challenge.
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Nice to see you here Stu, I hope you will be back for more. Great take, the image of the boots left standing among all the carnage their wearer has created is a powerful and blackly humerous one.
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Thanks, Iain. I actually found out about this through your blog/take on the prompt. I am woefully ignorant of all the blog challenges and prompts out there. Time to investigate more.
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This one is very addictive, and always interesting.
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A grim, timely tale.
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I wish it wasn’t timely, that it was just something to shake our heads over. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Welcome to Friday Fictioneers
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Thanks, Neil.
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That was stark, well written
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Thank you. I had to edit out close to 100 other words to distill it to this.
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You did well
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🙂
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Brutal story, Stu. The last line leaves a quite vivid image. Nice to see you in these neck of the woods.
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Thanks, Varad. This was the first thing that popped into my mind. Look for the next post (either tonight or tomorrow): came up with a completely different POV that is much lighter. So unlike me. 🙂
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Excellent job. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! 🙂
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Thank you. This is a very welcoming group. Glad I found it.
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Wow! Great description. The bomb knocked the person right out of their boots! Nicely done! 🙂
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Thank you. As I mentioned to another commenter, boiling this down to 100 words, I had to get the essence right. Glad you liked it.
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Yes…that is part of the challenge. But you did a great job! 😊
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Thank you
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Incredibly graphic – quite an achievement in 100 words. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next week.
My FriFic tale is called Jim and Jan!
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Thank you, Keith. I’m glad I found this Gang of Prompters.
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The second story I saw based on this prompt. Neither story ended well. Hmmm….
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Quite an action-packed scene, Stu. Very vivid. Welcome to Fictioneers.
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Thank you, Russell. I’m really glad I found this.
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Oh my, what a horrifying experience and terrible outcome–and extremely well-written 🙂
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The world can be a horrible place. Thank you for the compliment.
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That was quite a Friday Fictioneers debut! I shall look forward to more of your stories. 🙂
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thank you. Plenty behind me, with more to come.
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Dang! That was unexpected – brilliant twist!
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Thank you. It just felt right, esp after I did a little research.
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Welcome to this wonderful group, Stu.
Talk about entering with a bang! Very well done.
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Thank you, Dale. Everyone has been very welcoming, making me feel glad I joined in.
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It is extremely addictive. You’ve been warned… 😀
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You do have a wicked sense of humor – and this is a great story!
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